‘The Fall’ By Amber Schnoor

Peace and harmony was all they had ever know until satan disguised himself as a snake and convinced them to eat from the tree of knowledge. Flooded with all the tree bore Adam quickly realizes he can hear eve’s though. Terrified she could do the same he tricks her and convinces her that nothing happened from eating the apple. He trains her mind to be still so he can always be on watch soon they have children some are born fluid and the others still untill the still are slaves to the fluid. It’s gods command that the fluid will free the still from there mental shackles and they will all be forgiven for eating from the tree of knowledge

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