Peace and harmony were all Adam and Eve had ever know until satan disguised himself as a snake and convinced them to eat from the tree of knowledge. Flooded with all that the tree bore Adam quickly realizes he can hear eve’s thoughts. Terrified she could do the same to him, he tricks her and convinces her that nothing happened from eating the apple. He trains her mind to be still so he can always be on watch. soon they have children some are born fluid and the others born still minded until the eventual enslavement of the still. It’s gods command that the fluid will free the still one day and they will all be forgiven for eating from the tree of knowledge.
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