‘Tell me if your leaving’ By Mauren Lopio

Tell me if your leaving

“hey love! “, i called her, my girlfriend, my future wife hehe
“oh? “, she respond with a smile in her face
“i wanna tell you something hehe”, i excitedly ask
“what is it? ”
“I LOVE YOUUUUU”, i said and make a finger heart
“hahahahahahaha i know you always say that to me tsk”,
“i just want you to know i love you every second every minute every day foreverrr”, i said and hugged her tight

“Love you too”, she sweetly answered

When im in the hospital i saw fastly the father of my girlfriend crying alone at the outside the room…

When im inside, I saw the girl i always wanna see but my strunght was gone like the air putting it out in my body.  I saw my love lay down in the bed with a pale face.

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